A quatrain about, um, technofixes and enforced conformity?? WTAF

The plays of Bill will get you used to rhyme Iamb addicted to this form of verse And for the better or the worse (the worse!) Am churning lines about all stately crime.

Here it is – drumroll please –

They offer motherhood and apple pie They dangle gleaming technofix advances You mustn’t probe too deep, or else your chances Of climbing ladders will go awry

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  1. I thought I lost this first version of a poetic reply, so now – & the ‘mourning‘ after – the ‘original’* with three siblings, and presented in reverse’ order. A closing of a circle [of Life as Grief].

    Of ladders – like spaghetti – they slide

    Escape of the cauldron denied

    Cooked by corruption 

    Like us frogs, no interruption 

    And our ‘LAZY’ what’s fire doth hide

    Of thinking our feelings conspire

    To dress us in AI attire 

    To drown us in shallows 

    Of the PR we swallow

    Weighted down by it’s wonky desire

    Advances are reframed retreats

    When its Nature that knows the defeats

    From the fixes for lazyThat makes our sight hazy

    A blind faith motivated reasoning completes

    A pie in the face: how it ends

    The work, which of truth causes bends

    To the immediate and now

    With no thought for the cow

    Whose milk (as our mother) depends

    https://gumlet.tv/watch/67f7138f83cb79490421bb21 (start at 10:30)

    * …or ‘proof’ iTAIM/AI was not utilized. 😉  It is actually quite cathartic to dance with your verse, and this to converse, and with a means that is terse, ‘bout what what’s held in our purse, and this as a curse …so Thx❣️

    1. The (apple) pie is in the sky
      Or else the pie is in our face
      It is so late that whate’er we try
      This is the end of the human race…

      (PS I will be stealing your pie in the face line for other things, I think!)

      1. Steal away❣️

        And – for [a helpful?] perspective – to have interned corpses in a Quaker cemetery for 15 years is a heart and mind bender. Corpses walking we are. WORD! What we do that is just, merciful, and charitable on our way to our expiration date is what our walk defines as life …and is ALSO our as-go[]d-as-it-gets⁉️

        =)

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